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Be Thankful

thankfulThanksgiving is this Thursday. Since Christmas has taken over November you could be excused if you didn’t notice. I like Thanksgiving. It’s not my favorite holiday (that would be Halloween), but it’s nice to have a holiday with family that doesn’t involve the stress of presents. The history of Thanksgiving can get sticky, so I like to think of what Thanksgiving has become, not what it was.

Thanksgiving is a day of giving thanks. If we all focus on that I think the fourth Thursday of November could become the happiest day of the year. No matter who you are there is something to be thankful for, even if it’s nothing more than the ability to give thanks.

So let’s all give thanks. Make a list of ten things that make you thankful. If you don’t want to read it out loud at the dining table I don’t blame you, but perhaps you could write it down and hang it somewhere. Have everyone coming to your house make their thankful list and hang them all together. Then people can read them if they want to.

Here’s my list:

10 Things Jennifer is Thankful For (in no particular order)

  1. My husband, who keeps the house warm and watches bad movies with me (it must be love)
  2. My friends, who hang out with me even though I’m weird
  3. My house (the pink palace) that is the perfect size for me
  4. My family. who supports me, no matter what
  5. The library that feeds my book habit
  6. The internet, which allows me to learn, to laugh, and to keep in touch with friends and family
  7. My health, which I don’t respect enough, but allows me to follow my dreams
  8. The planet that gives me a place to live and new places to visit
  9. The universe that fills me with wonder and questions
  10. Life, that I don’t take for granted. I love waking up every morning.

There is my list. I’d love to see yours. Feel free to post it in the comments. Don’t worry. No one will judge it. Anyone can be thankful for anything and it’s not a place for criticism. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. I’m thankful that you read my blog.

“I am grateful for what I am and have. My thanksgiving is perpetual.”  – Henry David Thoreau

What does 50,000 words mean?

Some years I start Nanowrimo and the words don’t come, other years they flow so fast I can hardly keep up. This year the words have been flowing at the steady pace of 3,333 words a day. The long and short of this is that I reached 50,000 words today, November 15. By all accounts I completed Nano, but since my story isn’t finished I am not finished. So, what is 50,000 words? An admirable goal? A finished novella? A drop in the bucket? I don’t know, but for me it is a good start. I guess I’ll start on the next 50,000.

“Energy and persistence conquer all things.” Benjamin Franklin

 

This November Embrace Your Writing Style

pantserIf you’re a guy you might not be shaving this month, but I hope your hipster beard isn’t blocking your keyboard because it’s National Novel Writing Month. That’s right, in between Halloween and the start of the holiday season that we should all be embracing (instead of the start of the holiday season that the stores want us to embrace) is an important month for all of us who have voices in your heads. If you don’t have voices in your head, you’re not listening close enough and need to turn down your iPod.

As you have probably guessed, I’m participating in Nanowrimo. I look forward to this event every year, but this year I decided to try something new. In case you don’t now how Nanowrimo works, you’re supposed to write 50,000 original words from Nov. 1 to Nov. 30. In theory, these 50,000 words should be the beginning, middle, and hopefully end of one story, but no one is policing you, so I say, write whatever you want. Even though you can’t start writing until November 1, you can prepare to write. In October, you can outline your story, design some characters, and do research. I have done this in the past with mixed results.

This year, mostly because I am working on several other writing projects, I decided to do no preparing for Nanowrimo. I wouldn’t even think about what I wanted to write. I would start typing on November 1 and see where it goes. Around October 22, I came up with a great fantasy story, complete with setting, characters, and plot. I thought for a moment that it was going to be my Nanowrimo story. But I remembered my plan and shelved it.

I call myself a pantser (a cute word for a discovery writer), but I usually think I should outline a little bit. I don’t know anyone who is 100% pantser. Apparently I am, so I’m embracing that side of me this year. When I’m not writing I’m not thinking about my book. In fact, I feel like the ideas are flowing from the creative part of my brain directly to my fingertips. They’re not going to any other part of my brain, which is why when I’m not typing I’m not thinking about my story. The thinking portion of my brain has not been informed by the creative part of my brain that there is anything to think about. (This is probably not neurologically accurate, but it makes sense to me.)

The big question is, how am I doing? Are the words flowing like chocolate syrup, or am I sitting in front of a blank screen wishing I’d never signed up for Nano, and wondering if there’s any Halloween candy left (nope, it’s all gone.) The answer is… this is my best Nano ever. Today is day nine and I have already written 28,000 words. I hope to reach 50,000 words by Friday. And I won’t stop there. My story may be almost done, but I  am going to keep writing and discover if these characters want a second book. My daily average is 3,138 words and I feel like I could do more.

I hope you are enjoying Nano this month. If you are struggling, ask yourself a question. Are you a pantser or a plotter and are you fighting your natural writing style? If you are a pantser, toss the outline you thought you had to make and let your creative side take over. If you are a plotter, don’t worry about the rules that say every word should be part of your story. Use some of your word count to create an outline.

Writers sometimes treat pantser vs. plotter like Coke vs. Pepsi. There is only one right choice and the other is just gross. However, that is not true. Pantsers should be pantsers, and plotters should be plotters. It’s not my way or the highway. I can now say I’m a pantser and if being a pantser enables me to write 100,000 words in November I’m a happy pantser. Whatever type of writer you are, I hope you’re happy, too.

“There is in writing a constant joy of sudden discovery, of happy accident.” H. L. Mencken

 

Here’s your treat! An Original Halloween Story

Happy Halloween! It’s all treats on my blog, no tricks. You may remember me mentioning that I wanted to do one Halloween project each day in October. The ideas ranged from baking a pumpkin dessert to reading a story by Edgar Allen Poe. Well, I successfully met my goal. I did 31 fun Halloween projects. One of my ideas was to write a Halloween short story. I have tried to do this in the past and never succeeded. I don’t want to be clichéd and I don’t like horror. I wanted to write a clever story that wasn’t too scary. I also wanted to write a Halloween poem. I managed to do both projects in this one story.

The Witches of Harpersfleece is about two competing witches. One wants to save the children and one wants to steal a child. They both want to gather as much magic as possible. Who will win? Read on to find out. This short story is around 11oo words. A perfect length to read while trying to find a place to hide the kid’s candy that they don’t already know about. Happy Halloween!

The Witches of Harpersfleece

From the edge of my front porch, I watched the three boys, dressed as a cowboy, a robot, and a ninja, stop to trick-or-treat at my next-door-neighbor’s house. The increase of magic gave me a shiver. Mrs. Morton was known for having the best treats in town, and all the kids loved her. I listened in while she whispered to the boys, encouraging them to head home instead of coming to my house for the annual children’s Halloween party. I flicked a thought toward the boys, and they shook their heads. The only way to absorb the most magic possible was to have access to all the children in town, so I kept a close eye on Mrs. Morton. She’d been successful in the past, but no one, especially a fellow witch, was going to derail my Halloween plans this year.

The boys left her porch and walked over to my gate, and I cackled in anticipation. Why had I bothered with a spell? No boy would listen to an adult dressed up like a fat fairy, even if she did have more jack o’ lanterns on her porch than I did, and passed out better candy. My house was every child’s image of spooky, from my web-covered gate, complete with giant spider, to the gravestones in my yard.

Hi, Mrs. Merryweather,” the three boys said together.

“Happy Halloween, boys.” I tipped my pointy hat toward them. “Wonderful costumes. Gene, where’s your sister?” All the other children in town had arrived. I could not begin my plans until everyone was accounted for.

Gene took off his ten gallon hat and rubbed his forehead. “Harriet’s sick. She missed school all week.”

I looked toward town where Gene and Harriet lived with their grandmother. “I hope she feels better. You’re sure she won’t be coming tonight?”

Gene shook his head. “Gram says she’s running a fever and can’t get out of bed. We brought her some treats before coming here. That’s why we’re late.”

“Besides,” Martin piped up from inside his black mask. “Becky went missing last year on Halloween. My parents almost didn’t let me come to your party.”

I nodded solemnly. On my walks through town in the past week I had made sure reluctant parents had a change of mind. I wanted all the children at my party.

“Well, I’m glad you could make it. Go on in. There’s lots to eat and do. Those apples won’t bob themselves.”

The boys ran into the house to join the others. I glanced at Mrs. Morton who had come over to my picket fence. “It won’t matter,” I said. “Harriet won’t be leaving the house.” I muttered an incantation and Mrs. Morton’s plastic wings began to beat, lifting her off the ground.

“They’ll find out who you are if you keep this up.” Mrs. Morton shook her sparkly wand back at her wings, and fell back to the ground with a thump. “I’ll stop you eventually.” With a last swish of her wand, she pushed me into a gravestone, knocking it over. Waving, she went inside her cottage, and slammed the door.

I hated letting her get the last spell, but I had other work to do. Closing my eyes, I pictured young Harriet lying in her bed. With a sing-song chant I gave her deepened sleep. I didn’t want her wandering over to the party once I had shut the door. Remembering nosy neighbors I looked back at Mrs. Morton’s cottage, with its multitude of grinning pumpkins, and recited a privacy spell. Take that, you meddling toad.

Now that all my young guests had arrived, I joined the party. No children lingered in the entryway, so once I closed and locked the door I put the brace across it and increased the protection charms. There would be no interruptions tonight.

In the Great Room, nurses, police officers, and princesses stood in line to bob for apples, and pin the pumpkin on the headless horseman. Other costumed children carved jack o’ lanterns or colored paper masks. Along one wall a table was covered with delicious treats, mac and cheese molded into mini-brains, deviled eggs decorated with olive spiders, and finger carrot sticks, along with other festive delights.

The air filled with the sound of laughter and the spicy smells of pumpkin and cider. The frisson of magic I had felt outside swelled to a cacophony in this contained space. I spoke a charm that no one heard and the children played with even more enthusiasm. I thought the magic might raise the roof. And yet I knew what I had to do to get even more.

A Monster Mash dance-off followed the costume contest, with shrieks of delight and moans of disappointment echoing through the house. For me, though, the highlight of the evening had yet to start.

Soon the clock ticked closer to midnight and the mood of the party changed. I dimmed the lights and turned down the music. With a subtle suggestion, the children gathered around me where I sat on a tall stool with my arms raised. Pillar candles cast spooky shadows on the walls. In unison, the group sat on the floor when I lowered my hands.

 

“As midnight nears the time has come

to tell a tale of long ago,

When witches greeted each as friend,

unless they were a ghastly foe.

For on Halloween night, the magic,

coveted by all, was known to ebb and flow.

It took children, children who believed,

to make the magic grow.

 

One hundred and fifty years past

two witches came to stay in Harpersfleece,

Where many children lived and believed

so the magic would never cease.

For years the witches and the children of the town

lived in harmonious peace,

Until one witch decided keeping a child

would help the magic increase.

 

Year after year the Harpersfleece children

continued to disappear,

The other witch knew that to save the children

she must persevere.”

 

The children sat unnaturally still as I told this well-known story. One by one they closed their eyes until they all slept before me.

 

“But even in this modern day

the children often hear,

‘Be abed before the moon rises

or you might be the missing one this year.’”

 

With that I blew out the last candle while the clock chimed twelve resonant tones.

* * *

Bright and early the next morning, I stood on my porch dismantling my plethora of Halloween decorations, so I could switch to my autumn and Thanksgiving displays. Mrs. Morton watch me while leaning on my fence. Tapping her no longer sparkly wand, she upended the neat pile of foam gravestones I had stacked on the porch. I restacked them, but was in too good a mood to retaliate.

“I see you had successful Halloween night,” she said, a pout on her pudgy face.

I looked up at a big yellow school bus driving by, filled with happy, well-rested children. Gene and his sister, Harriet, waved at us. We both waved back.

“Yes, Mrs. Morton,” I agreed. “The children are safe from you this year. It was a successful night.”